hi, its been a long time.but
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hi,
its been a long time.but i am back.here i go....
rog banakay reh gyaa hai,pyaar tere shehar da
mai maseeha dekhya,beemaar tere shehar da
ihdyaan galiyaan meri chadhadi jawaani khaa laiee
kion karan na dostaa satikar tere shehar da
jithay moyaan baad vi(maran baan)kafan nahi hoya naseeb
kaun pagal hun karay itbaar tere shehar da
ithay meri laash tak neelaam kar ditti gaie
lathya karza ajay naa yaar tere shehar da
mai maseeha dekhyaa...........
rog ban ke reh gyaa.....
To all of Shiv's fans, I d
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To all of Shiv's fans, I don't know if you are aware of the huge amount of material on Shiv available at
http://www(dot)apanorg(dot)com
Shiv's style is primarily of personification (if that is the right word) for eg. in the line " mae ni mae mere geeta de naenaan wich birhon di radak pavey" : the literal translation is:
"mae ni mae" : mother o mother
"mere geetan de naenan wich": within my song's eyes
"birhon di radak pavey": is felt the irritation of separation
Here Shiv speaks of his songs as if they are a real person.
And the magic of Shiv's poetry stems for intensity of words he chooses to describe feelings that the objects so personified undergo.
humbly yours,
Sat Shiri Akaal to all of Shiv
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Sat Shiri Akaal to all of Shiv's fan!!! Mai vi Shiv di shaayeri di kaayal haa... pata nai kiyu par bachpan ton hi oh mera fav poet riha hai... Mai te meri sister done Shiv diyaan poems like kardiyaa haa... Luckily ajj takk jinne vi mere punjabi friends bane ne almost sab ne shiv diyaan rachnaavan padiyaan hoyiaan ne te saare hi Shiv diyaa rachnaavaan nu like karde ne... Shiv diyaan rachnaavan ch jo dard hai oh dhur andar takk jaa ke bande nu jhunjlaa dinda hai... Mai Shiv diyaa almost saariyaan rachnaavan padiyaan ne.. te ousdi life-story te jinnia vi books mainu miliaan mai pariyaan ne... Haalan ke odon taa mera birth vi nai si hoeya jad shiv es duniyaa ton chala geya c par fer vi ikk aapnapan mehsoos hunda hai ousdiyaa rachnaava parh ke te dil kehnda hai ke kaash mai ous Mahaan Poet nu kade ikk waar hi life ch mili hundi!!!
vaah dirt ji, maitho vi reh na
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vaah dirt ji, maitho vi reh nahi hunda aggay suno;
ranghar naalo khinghar changga
jis par pair ghasaaee da.
bullaya shauh nu soee paavay,
jehdaa bakra banay kasaaee da.
tera naam dhayaee da
saeean tera naam dhiyaee da
mere khyaal ch appaan bulleh shaah diyaan kaafiyaan da separate page banaaeiye.(jay tuhaada saath rahay taan).is page tay sirf shiv nu hi rakhiay.ki khyaal hai tuhaada?
shiv di "loona" vichon
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shiv di "loona" vichon kujh satraan pesh nay,
dharti di gal soch kay,man na karo bura
eh jannani hai paap di,ih papan di jaah
paap tan is da karam hai,is da paap subhaa
jay eh paap kamaay na,tan ajjay mar jaa
aao mudieaye parlok nu, mehakaan de par laa
ghul jaeeay vich mehak de,ghul jaeeaye vich vaa.
vaah dirt ji, maitho vi reh na
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vaah dirt ji, maitho vi reh nahi hunda aggay suno;
ranghar naalo khinghar changga
jis par pair ghasaaee da.
bullaya shauh nu soee paavay,
jehdaa bakra banay kasaaee da.
tera naam dhayaee da
saeean tera naam dhiyaee da
mere khyaal ch appaan bulleh shaah diyaan kaafiyaan da separate page banaaeiye.(jay tuhaada saath rahay taan).is page tay sirf shiv nu hi rakhiay.ki khyaal hai tuhaada?