new student comie in

teacher sun:
I fainly make a decicion to learn English and find your Web.I decid to study english use your way.I'm introduce myself first.I'm 32and workig for a perfessonal company and work time is 12 hours every day.I have not holiday and get bad salary,it"s only 1200 yuan a mouth.i want change my life by English.That"s just jiking . i'm more enjou myself. i'm every good than the people who is mo work.English is only my interest.I study English for two gears.but i can't say any word and can't write any text.
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i want study in your Web.but i have not more time to get WEB.mebey today can come on ,tomorrow cant come.please excuse me .but I decid to until sutdy in your weB.
this is my first text,certainlyi t's very bad,but I already write a text. give me some teach.and wish me will change good than before,don't laugh me back.every brother.

can you repear my text?my friends?

你可以告诉你的QQ号，用语音介绍一下压码法。

第一次写英语，还不错，里面有一些错误，简单修改了一下，因为压码法可以在学习过程中自动练习语法，所以没有修改语法方面的错误。
New student come in
Teacher sun:
I fairly make a decision to learn English and find your Web. I decide to study English use your way. I’m introducing myself first. I’m 32and working for a professional company and work time is 12 hours every day. I have not holiday and get bad salary, it’s only 1200 Yuan a mouth. I want change my life by English. That’s just joking. I’m more enjoying myself. I’m every good than the person who is mo work. English is only my interest. I study English for two gears. But I can't say any word and can't write any text.
.
I want study in your Web. But I have not more time to get WEB. Maybe today can come on, tomorrow can’t come. Please excuse me .but I decide to until study in your web.
This is my first text, certainly it's very bad, but I already write a text. Give me some teach. And wish me will change good than before, don't laugh me back. every brother.

THANK you for your change,teacher Sun ,i have no more time on lion,may i have your QQ?I'll keeping to  you.I must go to work at 8 o'clock.the I work 12 hours.

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